Excelent movie!
This flash is just too dawn awesome! All the animation was very smooth, all the images were excelently made, the music, the sounds, the voice acting, the story, every thing! It sure deserved the daily feature and I really don't know how it could be any better.
One question though: Why were those mercenaries right there on the corridor to attack Tarboy? Shouldn't security guards be there or something like that?
I gotta admit that was something we were a bit iffy on for a while, whether it made logical sense. In the end we just figured that mercenaries were cool, and that maybe coolness factor would outweigh the discontinuity :P Thanks for the review
Quite decent
The animation and humor were good, as well the musics, the sounds and the story. The voice act wasn't bad, but sometimes it was so low or the music was so loud that I couldn't hear or urderstand what they were saying.
Sometimes the lip sync didn't follow the voice act (like in the last line of the evil boss) and sometimes the characters looked too stopped (like in the last appearence of the blond assistent of the evil boss). And I think you could work more on the drawings.
Now, despite the critics, that wasn't bad. It was a good video. I just think it could be better; and I hope that my critics helps with it.
Well I will get better.
Each episode is and hopefully will continue to be.
Poderia ter sido melhor
Sério, tem um monte de partes que não tão bem desenhadas ou não foram engraçadas. Sei la. É até bom fazer uma collab desas pra mostra pros americanos um poco da nossa cultura e blablabla mas poxa, trabalhem mais.
Tentem fazer umas piadas mais engraçadas, trabalhar mais nos desenhos e pegar uma voz melhor pra partes como a do saci. E vcs também nem falaram do curupira mas teve 2 partes do boto.
Mas dexando as críticas pra lá, a collab ta bem boa no final das contas. Teve até uma parte pra explica cada bicho pros americanos e os desenhos tavam bem brasileiros (digamos assim) . Parabens.
Funny
Finally a stickman video not focused on the fight. The music choice was excellent and I liked the attention on the details. The expresions of the characters was good too.
I noticed the mouth of chuck was strange when he first saw echo and it become decent only after being fully opened. That's not a big problem, but something to fix if you're perfectionist.
And I think the video would be better if had voice acting (especially on the last scene); though the humor is still good without it... And a bigger lenght is also welcome, but not necessary (since this is just a little thing to get some laughts).
A good work overall, congratulations.
Spend more time working on it
The animation was low quality and there was no background, but had a nice music going on. And all the actions were too fast to fully apreciate (I had to watch twice to see all the plot). Put more frames between the scenes to make then smoother.
I know this is just a flash to improve your drawing skills, but I think it would be better if you just improve then BEFORE submitting some real thing. You would have better movies to show and probably more popularity. Or you can just continue with your way since most of your flashes ends on the top 5 of the day. Still, I'd rather see better things coming from you.
Anyway, good job and good luck training with frame by frame.
"the animation was low quality", you say, all tween aniamtion, only need a draw, have more quality of animation frame by frame??!! SIR SORRY, BUT YOU ARE A GREAT RETARD IGNORANT OF 15 YEAR OLD OF SHIT, YOU NOT HAVE IDEA OF NOTHING, FIRE YOUSELF MOTHER FUCKER !
For make a tween you make a draw and move for more of 5 seg, how more of 30 frames, and aniamtion frame by frame, i draw 30 draw diferents, YOU NOT HAVE IDEA OF WHAT IS ANIMATED, STUPID !!! STTUUPPIDDD !!!!
Niiiiiice
Very good fella, your first animation and you've got the weekly 10th!(07/15/09) Just take a look at the portal best of the week and you'll see this with your own eyes.
I don't know if you were too lazy to colour the drawings but in white and black the flash fitted very well with the music, the situation and your drawing style. And I have to say: you've done some great movement effects with the pencil! The shuriken part is a good example. So much lines and all of then were perfectly put. And every time the two swords hit there were sparks.
I also liked that the ninja used his feet to attack (not only the blade), while the samurai only used his sword. They had different ways to fight.
And you've put an introduction before the fight and a funny scene at the end. These things help a lot to increase your score.
If your drawings were better I'd give you a 10, but this is something you'll have to train in order to make then better, so I won't complain about it.
You sure have a future, buddy. Let's see if your next work get the weekly first.
Good luck.
It wasn't a bad thing
But man, you have to work on your drawing skills. The idea was nice, the animation was kinda smooth, the voice acting wasn't bad, but those low quality drawings ruined everything. And there were some parts without any music at all; fix this next time to make the flash better, ok? You can do some pretty neat work budy, just train more with the pencil before making another movie like this. Good luck.
Art has definitely been one of my weaker areas. Not that writing was good either, but I at least had some practice with that, unlike my art! I've still got some pretty weak art, though I think it's developed into a bit more "watchable" style at this point. (And I think I've improved in a lot of the other areas as well!)
What can I say...
Since you will be working only on the goku movies for now, I'll review this movie based on things you can improve in the serie.
First of all, some things to make you happy: I've got some nice effects and sounds (for the use in a sprite fight), the music was good, you used well the few sprites of hitsugaya bankai and you changed to different battlefields a couple of times.
I'm also glad that when you zoomed the sprites, it was for only a little time. I addmit that I hate with no good reason the zoom of sprites, but I liked the effect you did with it.
Another point is that in a lot of times the momevent of the characters had only like 2 sprites of animation. You need to put a sprite between then to make a smoother visualisation.
The battle was too predictable (special attacks, sword fights, bankai...) ...yeah, I know it's a sprite fight and you ran out of ideas...but an interference of the scenario, a dramatic scene (maybe...), a comedy moment, anything would make it nicer.
And there was only two moments that the sounds were too low/loud, but I know you will regulate the sounds next time (I just don't want you to forget).
I know you just do it for fun and just for the people who love these movies, however, I still think that you can be in a level above. I think that you have pottential. Just try harder and if you make a movie that gets a lot of attention (and/or even get a daily 1º, of course), you will see that you can be a better and more famous animator than you ever imagined (even with sprites)...but that's just me.
Anyway, I'm sorry for the topic change...good luck with your future projects.
Nice review ^-^
The characters movement was understandable, I got lazy putting the mask on the Bankai Ichigo's sprites and left some movements out lol. I'm tired so I don't really feel like responding to everything else, but everything you said makes sense.
Thx for the review
White noise is good
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