A nice example of heroic poem, sounds like something that a medieval bard or Vikings scald can sing during a feast. The rhythm and pacing were not always fluent and consistent, and sometimes I wished for better rhymes, but I overall enjoyed it anyway.
Fountains hold the greatest secrets
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Good work! Poetry is really hard and I respect how you were able to make your whole piece cohesively poetic. Even before things escalated, you did a great job having the witch come off as animalistic or even beastly. Full of some cool imagery and it's always great fun to see people take bold moves, like centering your piece around one main scene. Overall really solid, thank you for participating!